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UNSTRUCTURED
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 01:16:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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unblocked
and unfurled
still easily
given a whirl
unsatisfied
and unworthy
still shocked
and blurry
uncrowded
and uncontent
living hard
with all she was sent
uncooked
and undernourished
always needy
and unable to flourish
unsympathetic
and unsound
given half the chance
she'll come unwound
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-10-22 01:16:57]
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Re: UNSTRUCTURED
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM AEST
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unbelieveably moving
Shari |
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Re: UNSTRUCTURED
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 02:09:00 AM AEST
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Very creative with your words here! Great work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: UNSTRUCTURED
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 10:31:12 AM AEST
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| gives me the feeling of someone so young, playing with something so dangerous. good write. Crow |
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