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Lifes End
Contributed by
rain
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Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 10:00:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I've wondered far across this plane
I've seen things only i could dream.
I dont know when I'll be back again
cus I dont know when I'm leaving here.
But I'll take each day one step at a time
and I'll hold your hand if you hold mine,
while we're walking one strait line
toward the sun as it's going down.
Each scar tells a story
each tear sings a song
about a life I've lived
and a time thats all but gone.
well I dont know when my time will come
but I'll walk quitly toward the sun
and say goodbye to today.
Copyright ©
rain
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2003-10-22 22:00:43]
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Re: Lifes End
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 10:15:14 PM AEST
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This gave me a peaceful feeling...so accepting of mortal fate. Very well done! :o)
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Re: Lifes End
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2003 @ 10:37:27 PM AEST
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Great write!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Lifes End
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 12:43:05 AM AEST
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wow... I'm not sure what to say...
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