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Reality Factor
Contributed by
jaeann
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Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 04:45:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The ache is always there
three miles plus seventy-two
not a day in sight
that I could ever see you.
The trouble with us is
too much thought
naughty or nice
we just do what we ought.
The lust from day one
a simple little drive
rose petals and glitter
worth the will to survive.
The knowledge was easy
the road so dark
a painful reminder
we were more than just a lark.
The need for your touch
the validation of lust
is a constant demon
one I cannot trust.
The closing of the door
open the window wide
forever in my dreams
never far from you I hide.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-10-23 04:45:49]
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Re: Reality Factor
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by venkat on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 05:18:40 AM AEST
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Well written.the line "forever in my dreams, never far from you I hide" wraps beautifully. venkat
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Re: Reality Factor
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 05:24:37 AM AEST
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so very well written and moving
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Re: Reality Factor
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by Crow on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 03:58:19 PM AEST
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| good write, i like the ending, Crow |
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Re: Reality Factor
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 06:56:26 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem. Good job! |
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