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Contributed by
Schnikes13
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Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 09:41:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Some people look at me and see a girl
Whos living in a perfect world
But thats not all there is to see
No
No one will ever know the real me
She hides and never shows the tears she cries
She lives her life as though its not made of lies
All she thinks about is what she can never be
Living life full of uncertainty
And she conceals herself in me
Whos to say she takes things for granted?
Im clearly conscious to all I have
And though at times I may seem disenchanted,
The world will never fully understand
I know that I am not a piece
Of this whole worlds endless caprice
So now here I am for all to die
But they cant take away all I know
And all that I want to be
No one will ever know the real me
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Schnikes13
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2003-10-23 21:41:00]
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Re: Detached
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 23rd October 2003 @ 11:17:09 PM AEST
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Excellent poem!! so sad but so well written.
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Re: Detached
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 03:04:42 PM AEST
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| i got this poem in a forward once a couple years ago...? |
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