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becomin' the man
Contributed by
ml03
on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 01:05:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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ur idenity
hidden
lost and confused
don't know
who you are
don't lose hope
and faith
which way
will your road
go
no one knows
don't cry
don't let it get you down
and depressed
don't let it defeat you
it'll all be ok
don't cry
and wish you were
dead
boi
i need you
i love you
but
not in that way
i'm here for you
we've all been there
done that
it ain't worth the tears
we all made it
and so will you
don't take the razor out
don't pull the trigger
it ain't worth
killin' yourself
your idenity
is fickle
changin'
from boi to man
findin'
what it wants
and likes
you're becoming
the man in the mirror
Copyright ©
ml03
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2003-10-24 01:05:59]
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Re: becomin' the man
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 10:53:36 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful; i feel for your friend, and hope you've given this to him. i like the way you've written this poem, and hope to read more of your work. painted_echos |
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