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I'd Like To Tell You
Contributed by
Schnikes13
on
Friday, 24th October 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There are more then just a few things
That I need to get off my chest,
Some may sound pathetic
Others may seem more serious then the rest
I dont know how to deal with all this,
With you leaving me before you have to go
I know you know whats wrong with me
But you dont know that you know
I feel a little back stabbed
Because you ditched me for your girl
You also ditched many others
In fact, you ditched the rest of the world
And you two look so happy,
I wish I were like her
But I never will be
And I never were
It seems to me that I am invisible
And that she is clear to see
Every night I prayed and hoped
That in her place would be me
I cant seem to eat any food
Or get a wink of sleep at night
By grades have gone plundering
And I know that this isnt right
I feel sick every time I see you two
Even just utter a sound
My whole life fell apart
When you choose to turn around
And neither of you see what youre doing to me
How much pain I am going through
How your ignorance towards me is hurting
How my misery is because of you
I tried so hard to be happy for you
But its not all that easy to complete
Im stressed out, wigged out, and scared
Because its with her, I have to compete
Im too afraid that if I fight
Youll walk out, and leave me all alone
You make me feel so unloved
When you leave me on my own
Its like youre slapping me across the face
And saying that no one will care
Telling me that you dont need me
And that you will never be there
And now, you probably think Im crazy
And that all of this is in my head
But you really make me feel that way
With all you did and with all you said
I dont know why I still forgive you
Every time you make me feel sad
You always say that youre sorry
And that you feel really bad
And me being me, I believe you
I believe every word you say
If you ever do something thats wrong
I believe you didnt intend for it to be that way
But nows a time when I wont be there
The next time you call my name
You always decided to leave me deserted
And Ill make you feel the same
And now you know just how much it hurts
When the one you need is so far away
You used to mean the world to me
But I guess thats not how it is today
Ive given up on reaching out
Because I know youll leave me forever on my own,
Just remember, that without her
You are entirely all alone
Copyright ©
Schnikes13
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2003-10-24 23:20:00]
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Re: I'd Like To Tell You
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by Rain on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 01:24:47 AM AEST
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you figure people would know that girl/boy friends will come and go but friends are sapose to be forever.
i know how it feel to be totally desserted by a friend when they find someone they think they love. its tough and even tougher to not feel sorry for them when they get dumped and come crawling back for comfort.
great poem though.
~sara~ |
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Re: I'd Like To Tell You
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 09:40:47 AM AEST
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| I've been through this too... don't worry they always come back.... ;) Great write, full of emotion. |
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Re: I'd Like To Tell You
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by Chanti on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 03:16:07 PM AEST
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| Aw beautiful write! His relationship wont last forever, and hell realize then how much he needs you. |
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