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Aesthetic Rendition
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 10:30:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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To the phantoms and dreams that aren't what they seem, and the final remains of my past:
Staring up at the moon,
As the silver rains down
Divine gifts from above
An ethereal crown
No thoughts passed his mind
As he studied the night
The twinkling white sights
And their mezmerized lights
A hand crept up high
Reaching out,
----far---
His gaze swept the sky,
--Embracing the stars--
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2003-10-25 10:30:24]
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Re: Aesthetic Rendition
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:43:11 PM AEST
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A hand crept up high
Reaching out,
----far---
His gaze swept the sky,
--Embracing the stars--
Loved this last stanza...done it so many times myself.
Interesting preamble as well.
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