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''Subtleties''
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 10:37:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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"To fate and time i dedicate this eery little write, a gift for all forever palled and left in darkest plight."
The feeling was always faint
A wisp of silent air
A whiff of things intangible
Of dreams and icy glares
A distinct waling which has no source
Unshakable deceit
A surreptitious call to arms
A war against belief
Bereft of hope
Far from relief
Dont hesitate or run
A futile path
Youll never last
Your life has just begun.
Copyright ©
EternitysLyre
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2003-10-25 10:37:24]
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Re: ''Subtleties''
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 06:45:08 PM AEST
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wow I enjoyed this especially the first line in the second stanza keep on writing.
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