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Eternity
Contributed by
Kirby
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Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 09:48:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Take a look at all your past.
Has at least one thing last?
Have thou loved all thee can?
Does thou moon not,
Shine on all of me?
I lovest you every night,
No matter if thou are
Not here to hold me tight.
Truest be my love for thee.
Which will last past our eternity.
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2003-10-25 21:48:39]
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Re: Eternity
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by addie on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 04:15:25 AM AEST
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beautifully done...and thanks a lot for sharing ...
keep it up
take care
addie |
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Re: Eternity
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:26:49 PM AEST
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If you use this language... it's better if you stick it through to the end...
It should read like this:
Take a look at all thy past
Has at least one thing last?
Have thee loved all thee can?
Does thee moon not
Shine on all of me?
I lovest thee every night
No matter if thou art
Not here to hold me tight
Truest be my love for thee
Will will last past our eternity
Good write though... the old language is hard to master. :) |
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Re: Eternity
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 07:30:12 PM AEST
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dearest kirby, very beautiful! i might say 'art' instead of 'are' ...i love this poem too:) ty for sharing it brought a warm smile to my face!
hugs n' love nessa |
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