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A Rose Through The Heart
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:08:09 PM in AEST
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A heart of glass, a rose of blood,
Mended together as though they were one,
The heart fragile, the rose true,
A single scar leaves such a bruise,
The tears are pure, the pain never leaves,
A simple dream, looking into your eyes, will you marry me,
Prepared for the worst, consumed by a curse,
A soft hearted man asking for your hand,
Lost in tomorrow, but trapped in the past,
Living in the present, hiding behind a mask,
Emotions rage, turning life's page,
Raven the rose, Phantom the heart,
Melted together praying we never have to part.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2003-10-26 18:08:09]
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Re: A Rose Through The Heart
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:21:33 PM AEST
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| What a beautiful love poem ... love this one ... Jan |
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Re: A Rose Through The Heart
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by POOBEAR on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 06:41:02 PM AEST
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Hi Phantom,
This is so beautiful and romantic.
I can't imagine any woman being foolish
enough to turn down a proposal by
a true gentleman like you. Really touched me.
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Re: A Rose Through The Heart
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:47:24 PM AEST
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Ahh Matt, I can see one of the reasons Raven accepted...who could have passed this up??
Lovely write....
Hugs to you and your beautiful Raven..
Jenni |
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Re: A Rose Through The Heart
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by brokenheartedfool on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:42:32 PM AEST
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A very good poem. Puts my writing to shame.
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Re: A Rose Through The Heart
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 09:21:17 PM AEST
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this is a very beautiful piece...touched me with warm feelings
Shari |
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Re: A Rose Through The Heart
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by PoeticReign on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:49:38 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful, lovely poem... that about sums it up :)
~Nikki |
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Re: A Rose Through The Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 02:33:45 AM AEST
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simply beautiful, true, and sweet like the love you two share, my best to you both:) hugs n' love nessa
~:*raven n' phantom 4ever*:~ |
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