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FACING THE CROWD
Contributed by
robbieb
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Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:13:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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I stand here watching,
As in slow motion,
And before my seeing eyes,
My childrens minds are growing.
I lie here dreaming,
And in the commotion,
With the lens of my soul,
I see my childrens minds are knowing.
Someday on their own.
With compulsions all around him,
My young man striving,
To be the best that he can be,
Amongst the in-crown just surviving.
Tomorrows another day.
Gathering in her circle,
My little girl trying,
To be the finest in the club,
Babys hurt feelings, crying.
Yesterday is gone.
Stand up strong!
Face the crowd!
You are the best to me!!!
~ Mom ~
9/28/00
Copyright ©
robbieb
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2003-10-26 19:13:03]
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Re: FACING THE CROWD
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 07:55:15 PM AEST
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| This poem touched me so much. So much love and emotion are involved in this. A very beautiful poem |
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Re: FACING THE CROWD
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:04:52 PM AEST
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| my first stop-by very good work, touching. Crow |
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Re: FACING THE CROWD
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:25:33 PM AEST
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Good write...Very nicely done....
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Re: FACING THE CROWD
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by brokenheartedfool on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 08:39:41 PM AEST
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Not bad at all. A good write.
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Re: FACING THE CROWD
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by Peg on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:41:41 PM AEST
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Yes I remember those same feelings when my girls were facing all the peer pressure, wanting to blend in yet wanting to be true to their upbringing and training. I think they all turned out pretty darn good. Love you Robbieb.
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