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Send Me Away
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:02:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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These tears wont stop this pain wont end Why am I here? Why do I hurt? No one to save me from myself no on to hear my silent screams Cant you love me? Cant you care? Send me away Help me Free my soul Unlock my happiness See my joy But you dont You just stare live your life not caring not seeing not seeing whats really here not seeing all the anguish Blinded by your ingorance Silenced my heart beat only hearing what you want but you know thats not real It's all in your head You'll never see You'll never help You'll only kill me So slowly I cant feel it Yet So horrible it dulls my senses Send me away somehow Rid me of you I've tried but failed You can succeed Tear my heart from my chest Taste of warm blood Feel my skin cool I know you want to I see it in your eyes and Hear it in your voice I know you hate You hate what can hurt you You hate what you know You hate Me Pity your soul Send me away Let me fly Earn my broken wings but no you just stare You just cause more Pain Why do I live? Why do you LET me live? Just leave me Go and never return If I must live It wont be with you For if it must Im not living... Just a body No soul no life No will no hope Just Kill me So you can stay And stare some more...
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Re: Send Me Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 10:15:31 PM AEST (User
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A really awesome write.... it had me spellbound from beginning to end...
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Re: Send Me Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:36:59 AM AEST (User
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Brilliant!
I love the way its written, i love the words use and i love the message it gives...basically i love it.
I can relate to this quite well, like many others it hits home
Take care
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Re: Send Me Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 08:04:45 AM AEST (User
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useless rambling yeh right,
This was a bloody awesome write, very gripping, liked it alot. |
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Re: Send Me Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:48:35 PM AEST (User
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wow very gripping... I love what you write I can relate to this so much and this is no different. Keep it up
Bobo (Joel) |
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