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without you
Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 12:28:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Without you
On this stone cold floor i'm lying,
Trapped within my own sorry, crying.
Tears stained on the floor,
Waiting to see you at the door.
Scared and alone, I dont know what to do.
I dont think I can survive without you.
You keep me breathing, you keep me moving,
The way you talk to me is soothing.
My head is screaming, I'm turning around and around.
I feel like im falling, down and down.
No one to turn to, I dont see you.
What do I do? What do I do?
I just cant take this,
Still framed unhappiness.
My heads turning around and around.
I feel like Im falling down and down.
They cant see anything wrong,
I was hiding all along.
There are marks on my body,
Im just not ready.
On this stone cold floor im lying,
Trapped within my sorry im crying.
Im tired of trying
I feel like im dying
Without you,
Without you,
I dont know what to do,
Without you
What will I ever do?
When I have everything but you?
I dont know what to do,
When I am without you.
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Re: without you
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:46:50 PM AEST
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I know that feeling. Great write. Just hang in there.
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Re: without you
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by Rage on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:59:51 PM AEST
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I know that feeling as well. But you just gotta keep hoping and work hard in rewards to see that person again.
Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: without you
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by Saira on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 03:38:59 PM AEST
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Emotions so intense...great write!
Saira |
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Re: without you
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:40:09 PM AEST
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wow great poem u pulled me into the poem and made me feel as if I was actually. Very deep, gripping, and emotional. Good stuff.
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