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Fear...Just Let It Go
Contributed by
Breezer08
on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 07:43:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The sun slips down
And caresses the top of the ocean
Spreading its warm glow
To shine on it's every motion
Melt into the ocean
Trash your worries, rid your fears
Become one with the waves
Let your troubles disappear
Don't be afraid to let go
If it becomes to hard to hold on
In this paradise of tranquility
Listen to its harmonic song
Melt into the ocean
Don't be scared anymore
Let your fears just fly away
Out of your mind and straight out the door
Give yourself a boost
Break free from dread's grasp
Nothing can stop you now
Fears let go its clasp
Now go on with your life
Be happy, outging and free
This is the end of my poem
Leaving you with words to be.
Copyright ©
Breezer08
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2003-10-27 07:43:11]
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Re: Fear...Just Let It Go
(User Rating: 1 )
by mercedes on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:08:18 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem though the meaning I got out of it was not what you meant it to be. I liked it anyway. |
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Re: Fear...Just Let It Go
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by Edubs on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 01:15:50 PM AEST
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I liked this one. It made me smile. Although I wish it where that easy to let the waves wash away my fears and worries.
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Re: Fear...Just Let It Go
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:09:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful, calming poem wish I could feel li ke that.
Bobo (Joel) |
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