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For A Second I Though I Died
Contributed by
tbsbikescene
on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:45:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This maze is never ending Your superficial thoughts are mistaken for true thoughts And your mistaken for someone who cares Suck the blood right outta my skin Suck it so fast it comes out blue again With your hands around my throte and i'm ready to die I'll spill my guts out and you won't even care you misleading f@#$er Don't you want to see what comes next Whats next you f@#$er
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2003-10-27 22:45:55]
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Re: For A Second I Though I Died
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by flamingblade on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:22:06 PM AEST
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you could tryt putting it in more lines
but otherwise
its good |
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