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Take Notes On Being Happy
Contributed by
tbsbikescene
on
Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 10:58:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This string is pulled and the rain comes pouring down The wheel is turned and lightning strikes the bleak unwanted dirt ground This meant nothing to you It meant everything to me Waking up with nothing to look forward to Is the worst feeling there is Its like someone pulled your heart out and brutally battered it I remember every word you said and you can't take them back **** you and your perfect little way of doing things Don't you ever want to be suprised? Have you ever lived? Go now and find your way back home before it gets dark NO we wouldn't want you to get lost in the clouds
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2003-10-27 22:58:06]
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Re: Take Notes On Being Happy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 03:19:31 PM AEST
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its a bit hard to follow with no line breaks....but you seem very upset in this piece, someone made you sad/angry and you express it nicely! You want them to know how you feel
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