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The End
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Monday, 27th October 2003 @ 11:31:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This is the end of the last time
Hanging off this perilous cliff
Bowed, defeated, and disgraced
Nothing can ease this torment
Which eats me like a virus
And cuts at me like a double edged sword
This is the end of the last time
I lick my blood-flecked lips
As I kiss my arm, blood-spattered floor
I'm chained to these walls
Screaming a hollow cry
Tormented, mutilated, and swollen
This is the end of the last time
Fingers raking the walls til
Their ground to the bone
Choking out empty, soundless sobs
I am the epitomy of failure
Chained to this wall
This is the end of the last time
I spit in my own eye
I beg for the pain
Which is rationed to me every night
It excites me in some twisted way
Even though my veins may bulge
This is the end of the last time
Blood trickling from my mouth, agape
Cursing every nameless, faceless god
I can think of, to dead to care
I scream out I've failed
A nameless suicide in this sea of faces
This is the last time...
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-10-27 23:31:58]
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Re: The End
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:06:40 AM AEST
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Hey girl,
don't know if these r real or jus writing but u got me convinced!
Great writing and very convincing!
Luv,
emy |
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Re: The End
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:14:40 PM AEST
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| Bloody hell Joel this is amazing. I am going to say what you say to me whenever you comment on my poems - stand strong, and hold on. Life is worth living, maybe not yet, but it will get better. I promise. |
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Re: The End
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by Chanti on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:21:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful as always Joel~
Keep on writing and dont lose hope.
(( Chanti |
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Re: The End
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 10th November 2003 @ 05:12:49 PM AEST
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keep going joel, and know you are NOT a failure! How could a failure possibly write such incredible poetry as you do??!
Great poem..
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Re: The End
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 08:29:00 PM AEST
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Joel, you are not a failure. I hope you keep your head held high kiddo. ************* hugs ************* *S* Cynthia
P.S.
Don't ever stop writing. |
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