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SUICIDE!
Contributed by
emystar
on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:26:05 AM in AEST
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Father God,
Our children are dieing at their own hand!
IT'S SPREADING ALL OVER THIS LAND!
They call um gangs, bloods, cripts, other names.
What a sad, tricky game!
There's nothing good in their end.
Please help them understand!
It leads to death, no place 2 hide!
Blow the cover on this suicide!
What happened, who failed him so?
They think they have no place to go!
Where is the key to their hearts
giving them love, a new start?
I'm just a concerned soul.
My heart bleeds for them, you know!
Give us wisdom to get thru
to reach um with your love so true!
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-10-28 00:26:05]
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Re: SUICIDE!
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 03:28:29 AM AEST
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| Oh, this is very heart moving..and there is truth..a very good write..Blessings Emy.. venkat |
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Re: SUICIDE!
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by Drzewo on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 09:14:16 AM AEST
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great poem!!!!
i really like it cause i also write lots of things concerning this topic. We should remind people fo how things are not ok here.... great one... !!! |
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Re: SUICIDE!
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 02:44:02 PM AEST
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| I`ve not seen much of this, a very good poem, and I do agree. Crow |
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Re: SUICIDE!
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by Serendippitty on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 10:55:08 PM AEST
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| nice work!! |
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Re: SUICIDE!
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 01:19:28 AM AEST
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Good poem indeed although sometimes love doesn't always work its the person that has to want to change. Nice write.
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Re: SUICIDE!
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 07:59:12 AM AEST
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Emy, thanking you so much for you wonderful comment on my poem Seduction. I've offended people and I'm very sorry. I'm still learning what can be written here and what can not. But I really enjoyed this poem Emy because it is very previlant in our socieity today, and so sad. You said it so well, and I thank you so much for sharing with us.
Warm Love,
Connie Sue
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Re: SUICIDE!
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 11:31:19 PM AEST
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Very beautiful emy, yes such a waist with all the killings when there's so much more that could be done benifiting every segment of society. a lovely and compassionate write my friend.
((((emy))))
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