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Dust upon the floor.
Contributed by
kay-p-m-devenish
on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 04:30:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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So,
It's JUST your life you toss,
no reason for any fuss,
no cause to speak of .......LOSS.
Go ahead,spit upon my heart,
kick it with your battered love
take your life and thus depart.
No need to struggle anymore
she wounded you so close LIFE'S door
and slam it in my face
where I stand longing for a trace
and praying for the grace........of you.
I once died too,
but breathe,I still do.
Go ahead,die,give up,
spill your will from its cup
or....
share your sup
share to ease our pain.
let us drink your rain.
Hope and dreams strangle from your deed
and lost am I in need of just your smile
how can you pass on by
blind to tears from I?
Was that a heartbeat that I heard?
Once upon a word
once beyond my blue?
that moment when I dared to stand and streatch my hand to you.
Gone.
Dust upon the floor
for
she dosent love you anymore
and that is all..that ...is ALL.
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2003-10-28 04:30:56]
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Re: Dust upon the floor.
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:13:34 PM AEST
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sounds to me you are better off with out
this guy kay keep a strong faith in yourself
all will work out
great write
putter |
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Re: Dust upon the floor.
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 12:37:20 PM AEST
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| I'm sure many people could relate to this in their own way. I think it was very well written. I agree though drop the dude find someone better who hasn't been recently hurt at least. No one ever takes advice or help as they should. |
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