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I Remember
Contributed by
Cobalt
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Tuesday, 28th October 2003 @ 11:49:42 AM in AEST
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I remember every litle thing. I remember the first time I truly saw you and thought just how beautiful you really were. I remember our first kiss and the first time that we made love. I can still remember your eyes the first time that you said that you loved me. I remember when I woke up one morning and realized that you would hate me forever. I walked away instead of try sealing hate to fate for what I'd done. I remember the pain in your eyes as you begged and pleaded as if it were your life. I remember the moment days ago when I realized it was true. I will forever remember all the wrong I've done. I know the pain in my heart will just be burried, yet never go away. I remember that now I've lost you. I remember forever, and ever, and always.
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Re: I Remember
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 06:35:30 PM AEST
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had to read it no body commented on it
so thought i would its not to bad pretty good |
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Re: I Remember
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 8th December 2003 @ 01:56:17 AM AEST
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Well..... "I" thought it was filled with love and regret and frustration..lots of emotion.
Excellent!!
Hey..has anyone ever suggested you set your writes out different>>>Im kidding im kidding lol.. *wink* |
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Re: I Remember
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by Kie on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 01:02:21 PM AEST
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| The type of pain you described in this poem just eats you up inside. It is horrible and this was a very powerful, moving poem. Kie |
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Re: I Remember
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by Stitch on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 10:40:13 AM AEST
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So this is how it started. Did you write before this? I can identify with this pain somewhat. The depth of it and the feeling of being submersed in memories and just wanting to drown there.
Stitch |
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Re: I Remember
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 03:32:50 AM AEST
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I am going to work my way through your poems, from this to your latest as Black13, so I don't forget (forget what? you, this, all your poetry . . . everything). Even if you're here anymore at all, I doubt you still check up on the Cobalt account, so maybe you won't see all my comments and maybe you will. That's not the point.
I don't know how long it'll take me to get through all these, but I guess I'll finish when I finish.
Anyhow. This poem stings . . . I wonder, would you-- would we, would anyone-- be happier forgetting? Memories . . . meh.
--Nora. |
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