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Self Destruction: Realization
Contributed by
undeadsuperstar
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:12:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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still i can recall awakening
from the slumber of my reason
realizing all life's vanity
for we live but just a season
as one would spring up from his bed
leaving sleep behind
i rose up from my ignorance
for i was no longer blind
emotions and reality
were both made clear to me
they are naught but dim illusions
and life is but a dream
our lives pass by so quicly
like smoke before the wind
our existances are over
as soon as they begin
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undeadsuperstar
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2003-10-29 00:12:18]
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Re: Self Destruction: Realization
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by brokenheartedfool on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:22:55 AM AEST
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good write i liked it alot
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Re: Self Destruction: Realization
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:16:44 AM AEST
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| I like this too ... great write ... Jan |
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Re: Self Destruction: Realization
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by Rain on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:45:37 AM AEST
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truth is found in both deepened thought and sleepless dreaming. your poem makes me think as it holds truth within its depths.
~sara~ |
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Re: Self Destruction: Realization
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 06:04:25 AM AEST
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Take each day like there is no tomorrow.hold on to one you hold dear
never worry about the tomorrows
first wipe away the tears.
look into the sunny skies
let the breeze fall on your face
hold the hand of one you love
and walk in tomorrow
.....i wonder why i wrote this....i just let it flow and said no more....take care.......enjoy what you have cause tomorrow may not come....thnaks for sharing your poem.........sandy |
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Re: Self Destruction: Realization
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 06:33:54 AM AEST
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Good write..loved it.
Jenni |
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Re: Self Destruction: Realization
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by Drzewo on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:45:47 PM AEST
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| great realization and I love the poem, but is it really self destr??... I mean, this realization leads to big benefits, we can start seizing the day, never care about future, death cause it's gonna come anyway. I would say it's a great step to our humanity.... but it's only a matter of title... rest is great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: Self Destruction: Realization
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 12:47:44 AM AEST
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in response to Drzewo:
yes, this is self destruction, for it marks the beginning of a spiral that will ultimately end in destruction. This is the birth of the loss of hope that grows like a cancer into despair and finally suicide.
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Re: Self Destruction: Realization
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 12:48:03 AM AEST
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in response to Drzewo:
yes, this is self destruction, for it marks the beginning of a spiral that will ultimately end in destruction. This is the birth of the loss of hope that grows like a cancer into despair and finally suicide.
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