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Love to Grace Dull Heaven
Contributed by
undeadsuperstar
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Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:09:01 AM in AEST
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i wish i may i wish i might
hold you forever and thru the night
thru the dawn 'til darkness fades
and nocturne fades to light of day
to melt away in each others arms
and fuse as one to join the stars
to grace dull heaven we conquer with
our love the past with a single kiss
we leave behind the world's sorrow
to embrace the hope of a brighter tomorrow
no longer tumoil fear despair
but only sunbeams in your hair
cause for you the heavens turn
and like the stars for you i burn
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2003-10-29 02:09:01]
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Re: Love to Grace Dull Heaven
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:25:28 AM AEST
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| Well, all I can say is this is a beautiful write ... and the hurt you must feel from her reaction I have been through that pain myself ... but keep on writing as this poem is tender, loving, and well written - (her loss) ... Jan |
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Re: Love to Grace Dull Heaven
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by Rain on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 02:42:17 AM AEST
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your girl friend reminds me of my boyfriend "thats nice" or "I read it" is all he ever says about my poems but i guess niether of them know how to put emotions to words. but trust me im sure it ment alot to her even if she doesnt know how to say it. its a good poem no matter what.
~sara~ |
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Re: Love to Grace Dull Heaven
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 05:47:34 AM AEST
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| well first of all its a great poem i like it very much.....second if you had wrote it to me i would had grabed and kissed you and would be very happy.....third...ever thought she is wrong for you.....forth...also your love ones are the ones hard to please....last ones to jump up and down over anything you do....take care and keep writing cause your a great poet......sandy |
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Re: Love to Grace Dull Heaven
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 06:19:55 AM AEST
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Ouch..I know the feeling..but don't worry... it's a wonderful poem and I'm sure it meant a lot to her but she probably doesn't know how to show it. Keep up the good work.
Jenni |
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Re: Love to Grace Dull Heaven
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 09:12:42 AM AEST
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| Thats pretty bogus man. I would find someone who can appreciate you... just me. I thought it was very good. I think it was written with a lot of love and emotion. Some people however just don't get a thing about poetry when they read it and all they can think to say is "thats nice". So I usually don't even bother showing them then they feel left out and they want to read and I get the same reaction. Just want to reach across the table and slap em sometimes. Keep it up though it was very good. |
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Re: Love to Grace Dull Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 12:03:53 PM AEST
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That's just beautiful... :)
Like someone said it's her loss if she doesn't appreciate this. |
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