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The Butchery
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 03:54:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The ghoul has reached my coffin now he
smash the lid. All I see is darkness and
two shining eyes.
Crawling to the church
and in a stream of light I see my mutila-
ted remains gore instead of flesh. Rotten
and filled with maggots I search for
modern life I would die to see, my kids
and wife.
A scream break the silence , a
human being died. Shocked of this morbid
sight. Crawling in the night. I'm so near
my dying place, I can see my loved.
I open
the door and there she stands, I hear the
children scream.
I saw people die, as dead as I was.
The children puked then died,
love has turned to carrion.
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cant-skate
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2003-10-29 15:54:13]
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Re: The Butchery
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:54:24 PM AEST
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| i search for modern life i would die to see........... wow.........so creative...... |
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Re: The Butchery
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by Merry on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 01:19:54 PM AEST
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this is definitely dark - i see many things in this poem - some ancient and some very much in the moment - horror, terror, death
very creative write
merry |
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