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HOLIDAY CRUSH
Contributed by
jaeann
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Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:02:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You were my sunflower
my shining light
tomorrow at this time
I'll remember that long ago sight.
Going from door to door
with your little hands held out
repeating your special mantra
to make sure your devil was not left out.
It was his second first
this night, one of your last
no pictures to keep the memory safe
everything lost in the past.
You can never recreate
though how hard you try
the remembrance of Halloween
will forever start with a cry.
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-10-29 16:02:13]
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Re: HOLIDAY CRUSH
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:06:57 PM AEST
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so very sad my heart goes out to you
Shari |
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Re: HOLIDAY CRUSH
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by cant-skate on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:32:26 PM AEST
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| Nicely done ! filled wid sadness |
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Re: HOLIDAY CRUSH
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:46:03 PM AEST
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| This is really sad..... and this was also a really good poem lovely written |
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Re: HOLIDAY CRUSH
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 04:51:05 PM AEST
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I slump my shoulders and sigh...rips at my heart to think of your pain.
This is a really great poem though..I loved the flow |
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Re: HOLIDAY CRUSH
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 10:52:27 PM AEST
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| I`m so sorry for your loss, I do sadden with this write. my very best thoughts for you, and yours. |
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Re: HOLIDAY CRUSH
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 12:52:21 AM AEST
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Oh how sad Jaymee.....it's always the first's that kills you, the first time you went alone on Holloween, the first time, for this and the first time for that. But soon even that disappears with the years...honestly it does Jaymee...just be patient with yourself, and kind too!
Lovely poem, though very sad, and forlorn. I wish I could help you through!
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Re: HOLIDAY CRUSH
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 06:35:49 AM AEST
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| Oh, such an incredible write ... have read it many times ... the emotions it evokes ... I'm so very sorry, but words could not make a dent in your pain ... wonderful poem ... Jan |
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