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The Painter And His Muse
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 11:34:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Artistic in his soulful way,he paints with tender brush
Deep into the dark of night,when all the world is hush
Surrounded by the silence,but for the beating of his heart
A masterpiece in colours,his love a work of art
Gentle strokes at midnight,rhythmic touches here and there
Every now and then a glimpse,at his faithful model in the chair
Posing as if frozen,within the beauty of his presence
She dreams away inside,as she's drinking in his essence
Many nights they've spent together,a painter and his muse
She holds his every movement,he captures her in hues
Candlelight adorns her ,casting shadows across her skin
He paints away his worries,portaying her light within
Across her sliken thighs,lie a dozen roses scarlet red
And secretly he wishes, he were lying there instead
Her hands beneath the petals,a smile softly plays
Thoughts of holding him near,gentle strokes upon his face
Together and yet apart,this is the way of every night
One with dreams and hopes,the other finding light
Do not shed a tear for them,for this their path they choose
For at least they have these moments,the painter and his muse
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
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2003-10-29 23:34:21]
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Re: The Painter And His Muse
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 12:06:08 AM AEST
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Re: The Painter And His Muse
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 12:26:46 AM AEST
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And wonderful moments they are and always will be.
Lovely poem, with much feeling and hidden sadness indeed!
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Re: The Painter And His Muse
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 02:40:52 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write ... words can't express how much I love this poem ... Jan |
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Re: The Painter And His Muse
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 12:53:21 PM AEST
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| so beautifully sad.........awesome melodic feel to it....... great job....... |
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Re: The Painter And His Muse
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by Lone_er on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 06:24:24 PM AEST
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| Absolutely wonderfully written maam. Lays the romantic heart bare. -Russ |
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Re: The Painter And His Muse
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 01:05:15 AM AEST
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| What a wonderful poem. I loved the way you described everything. Lovely, lovely write. Thanks a bunch for sharing. |
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Re: The Painter And His Muse
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 06:25:29 PM AEST
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With every stroke of your pen you capture the heart and soul of the reader. Always I have been in awe of your poetry and it's because of writes like this one. Every image, every emotion is so perfectly described. Hat in hand and roses at your feet :o)
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