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continue to cut
Contributed by
rain
on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 01:52:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A razorblade in my back pocket
Shuved in my fake leather wallet
Covered in dry crimson blood
I feel i must cut again
Cover the blade in fresh blood
Let it rip through my skin
Allow the blood to drip from fresh scars
But too many eyes watching
No blood can spill
Least someone see
Hide the scars
Hide the blade
Hide the blood
But continue to cut.
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rain
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2003-10-30 01:52:19]
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Re: continue to cut
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cammy on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 02:52:47 AM AEST
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| I loved your poem, you have no idea how much I can relate to it. Its short but with immense pain, and feeling in it. I loved it. Great work champ |
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Re: continue to cut
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by Strawberry_Stitch on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:41:03 AM AEST
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Its a good poem but what you should put up is a warning say **trigger** just so cutters dont read this and blame u for not putting the warning up
But excellent write |
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