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LAST DAY OF OCTOBER
Contributed by
lovingcritters
on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 03:22:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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October Winds whip
Tall Pine limbs flap, big bird wings.
Eagles soaring high!
Instruments are racked.
Nature's muscians take bow.
Applause, winter snow!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
Last day of
October 2003
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2003-10-30 03:22:52]
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Re: LAST DAY OF OCTOBER
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by norm on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 10:10:41 AM AEST
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Ain't Haiku just wonderfully grand
it's easy to reasonably understand.
You use it well so what the hell
Give us the world from McNally and Rand...
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Re: LAST DAY OF OCTOBER
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 12:45:58 PM AEST
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| yes....applause!!!!!! |
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Re: LAST DAY OF OCTOBER
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 11:49:55 PM AEST
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I like I like! *smiles*
Oh but how I would love for you to write something on this in a longer version,with the imagery you paint..Just a thought my friend ..Wonderful! |
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