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these moments
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 04:38:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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laying with you
on such a comftorble sofa
pure bliss
could it get better then this?
feeling the comfort of your arms
and your caring nature through your gentle kiss
listening to music we both like
knowing you're as happy as i am
the best kind of company
in years i know these feelings could change
it wont be like this for eternity
but the memories are something that will never leave me
this moment will live on forever
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loopylou
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2003-10-30 16:38:36]
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Re: these moments
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by Peg on
Thursday, 30th October 2003 @ 05:11:52 PM AEST
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| You describe so well the comfort of a loving relationship. Good Job. |
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Re: these moments
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by michelled43 on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 08:59:10 AM AEST
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| this poem is so pretty......the relationship you write about seems to be really great..... |
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