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FIRESTORM
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:21:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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a child no more,
with one hell of a wicked score,
tired of all the bores
and carrying around the lore,
she's hungry for the shore
and getting to her core,
wearing of being sore,
waiting for someone to yell "Fore!",
fearful of the slamming door,
wished she could throw a fit upon the floor
and stop being everyone's wh***,
wake up from the gore
of remembering when she was four,
left always wanting more,
feeling tore
and wore,
wondering which lesson all the pain is for,
guessing what else is in store,
while listening for the roar
and waiting for the tears to pour.
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-10-31 04:21:27]
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Re: FIRESTORM
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 07:38:35 AM AEST
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This is powerful... especially the last four lines.... very good write though very sad... my prayers are with the people in Cali.
God Bless. |
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Re: FIRESTORM
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:20:45 AM AEST
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| The rawness in your writes always gives me chills..deep torment that stays..drifting in and out.. |
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Re: FIRESTORM
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by Swallow on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 02:04:21 PM AEST
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| Intense. I liked it. |
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Re: FIRESTORM
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 07:18:40 PM AEST
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| good write, all good thoughts for you. Crow |
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Re: FIRESTORM
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by brokenheartedfool on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 10:25:36 PM AEST
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| Great write. I know its not easy making every line rhyme and making it sound good. Well done. |
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Re: FIRESTORM
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 05:06:35 PM AEST
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very intriguing and captivating not sure what else to say.
Bobo (Joel) |
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