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Runner
Contributed by
Swallow
on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 03:36:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Trees, earth rushing by, wind in my ears.
Mountains crumble before my eyes.
Sun pounds, painting my skin with years,
It cannot cover the marks of those lies.
Trampling over the shards of my dreams,
Pondering what at one time I "knew":
"Everything is just as it seems."
Once, I believed what my heart said was true.
I've wished the earth would swallow me up
And conceal me in it's shallow hell.
But I'm destined on my own misery to sup -
I can't run fast enough to escape myself.
Copyright ©
Swallow
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2003-10-31 15:36:03]
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Re: Runner
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by SkYYBLu on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 03:50:57 PM AEST
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...wow...very cool and imaginitive. It paints a picture in my mind...emotional...WOW
Would you mind posting a comment about one of my poems? Thanx. Much appreciated. :) |
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Re: Runner
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 04:48:09 PM AEST
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Maybe old but Id say this one is kinda awesome girl...actually it IS awesome!!!
An emotional and personal write.thanks for sharing |
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Re: Runner
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:00:34 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write .... every line I loved, but especially how you ended it ... Jan |
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