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Perfect
Contributed by
Schnikes13
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Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 05:45:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You got the life,
That everyone only dreams of
And all you seem to do is complain
While Im standing behind you,
Only wanting to know the feeling
That you must retain
Some things I dont see
Until the time comes
When its too late
But youll never know
What its like
To feel like people overrate
Youre more than amazing
In the eyes of all
Who come before you
And youll never know
What its like
To have people ignore you
I know Im not good enough
To be called
At least your friend
You may appear
To tolerate me
But I can tell that you pretend
Sorry, Im not like you
Sorry, I cant compare
But if you took the time to know to me
Maybe youll see that somethings there
While you sit high above the world
Basking in all your respect
I sit in the cold darkness
Knowing I cant be perfect
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Schnikes13
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2003-10-31 17:45:32]
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Re: Perfect
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:46:12 PM AEST
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| I liked it but I feel you need to know appearances can be deceiving. I hate praise anyways at least about something that takes no effort... I think I'll leave it at that. |
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Re: Perfect
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by Cathie on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 07:13:52 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem. I enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: Perfect
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 01:16:41 AM AEST
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| No one can be perfect, we were just not made like that. Very well written. |
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Re: Perfect
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by Nomie on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 03:16:27 AM AEST
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| like this one! :) good job! |
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