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WITHIN THE HALLS OF GOD'S HOUSE
Contributed by
jaeann
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Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:10:48 PM in AEST
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as a very young child
so innocent and shy
to fit right in
anything i would try
they were really nice at first
so proper and polite
then took me to their secret places
far from anyone's sight
i trusted and idolized them
from this they already knew
used it so against me
there was nothing i could do
i was brave and let them know
i ran away and told
all i got was punished
for lying with stories oh so bold
so many haunted years
i suffered right on through
for every one that ended
another picked up too
it mattered not the relationship
my mind, soul and body they took
family, friend and preacher man
every one of them had a hook
"we must abstain from our sins, my child.....
what we've been doing is so wrong.....
i've given it to god's hands now, but.....
let me introduce you to my throng......
now,
Ssssshhhhhh.....
stare at the staind glass windows
hush now, don't say a word....
even if you tremble....
you'll not ever be heard"
for every violation
came from the hand of a lord's deacon
and every cry for help
was snuffed out for a christian's beacon
within the halls of god's house
sat a lonely battered girl
he may have walked upon the water
but she was the casted pearl !
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-10-31 18:10:48]
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Re: WITHIN THE HALLS OF GOD'S HOUSE
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 06:49:53 PM AEST
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| I really hope this didn't happen and is not true.... I also hope it's not what I think it is... However if it is and you still have your faith then you are stronger than most people could ever hope to be. I like the poem and applaud a person as such. |
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Re: WITHIN THE HALLS OF GOD'S HOUSE
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 09:23:28 PM AEST
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You are an amazing woman of incredible strengths..I too applaud you..then hug you..(cant help myself..I'm the hugging bandit lol)
Brilliant write my friend..brilliant!!! |
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Re: WITHIN THE HALLS OF GOD'S HOUSE
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 11:41:06 PM AEST
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Oh, my dear Jaymee...I hear you, dear,
for you see they did that to me too! And I can name a million others. They are hypocrites, and deserve the tar and feathers! Now don't do as I do, but do as I say....watch these men,
they won't do those things during the day. They live in the darkness....and now in millions of little children's mind...even when grown....their atrocious tales you will still find. I was for forty years, as faithful as anyone person who was imperfect could be, but when their time came for me to bow down to them......they said, "You worship we!" I said, "Go fly your self-righteous kites.! You don't worship the God of Love....you are Snakes and Vipers....Hypocrites, without heart and without love!" Numerous many today...most only wear a robe for protection or money. Religion is dead, and that's isn't funny! I know Jaymee....but don't let those corrupt, hypocrites and apostates keep you and yours from his wonderful Love.
I love you too
lovingcritters
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Re: WITHIN THE HALLS OF GOD'S HOUSE
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by kalika_vidya on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:30:09 AM AEST
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| This is heart breaking..religion is stinking.. |
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Re: WITHIN THE HALLS OF GOD'S HOUSE
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by desertrose on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 03:08:39 AM AEST
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Great Write
I will return to read more of your work :)
Rose
http://www.todays-woman.net
Ps do drop by my site :) |
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