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Blood
Contributed by
brokenheartedfool
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:23:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sun shines rays of blood
The rain drips drops of blood
Blood is everywhere I see
This place would be a vampire's heaven
Fresh nectar from a clean sliced vein
Blood pours on the floor and runs down the walls
When theres blood theres death
And what is it all for
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2003-11-01 16:23:29]
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Re: Blood
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:26:49 PM AEST
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very dark I loved that fresh nectar line lol.
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Re: Blood
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by norticus on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 04:32:25 PM AEST
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| Where there's blood there's life but maybe I'm just splitting hairs. 3.5 on the Nortiscale. |
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Re: Blood
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by Merry on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:54:34 PM AEST
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this dark and gloriously so....but I must agree where there's blood there's life. Two sides to every coin
blessed be
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Re: Blood
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 06:25:56 AM AEST
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Blood is good, we need it to live, and it does sound like my kind of heaven...........
Then again not many are willing to part with what they need to live.
Excellent poem keep it up. |
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