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SACRIFICE
Contributed by
jaeann
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 07:20:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fire in the soul
tears in the heart........
layed upon the broken altar
silenced through the pain
beckoning forgiveness
was always lost in vain..........
cloaked words and hidden meanings
rushes of heat
cooling the soul of the broken angel
lying at their feet.......
Copyright ©
jaeann
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2003-11-01 19:20:01]
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Re: SACRIFICE
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:24:38 PM AEST
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You really have a way of pulling me in with every word..so deep and emotional.I guess it comes from the pain....(((hugs)))
Your work impresses me greatly! yet your pain saddens me. |
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Re: SACRIFICE
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 09:14:53 PM AEST
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Oh Poor Jaymee..this was extraordinary...and so sad....I throw roses at your feet, in hopes of someday removing the broken angle and replacing with beauty that you may walk with.
Many hugs for you as I understand.
ConSue |
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Re: SACRIFICE
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 06:41:53 AM AEST
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Really sad with so much pain.
Beautifully written. |
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