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Vulnerable
Contributed by
Schnikes13
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 07:37:04 PM in AEST
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Its nothing really complicated
Sorry these things are a bit belated
But I grew up never learning how to trust
So I sat back and waited
Till you finally became frustrated
You need to know? Tell me why you must
And I feel a little vulnerable
But then again, I always will
And Im trying to confide in you
But I havent gotten there still
And please dont be upset with me
And say that I dont even try
Because I really honestly do
Its just hard and Im not sure why
And now theres nothing I can hide
People would know if I ever denied
Theres no more use in lying
But there is no one who I could confide
No single person on my side
And getting someone, theres no use in trying
And I feel a little vulnerable
But then again, I always will
And Im trying to confide in you
But I havent gotten there still
And please dont be upset with me
And say that I dont even try
Because I really honestly do
Its just hard and Im not sure why
I say stuff I dont really mean
Im not that person; thats easily seen
Yet for some reason, people think thats me
But arent I just like every other teen?
Lost in a place, thats called in-between
And thats probably how I always will be
And I feel a little vulnerable
But then again, I always will
And Im trying to confide in you
But I havent gotten there still
And please dont be upset with me
And say that I dont even try
Because I really honestly do
Its just hard and Im not sure why
And If I find a way to rely on you
Ill tell you as soon as I know
Because if I tell you I trust
I know for sure you will never go
Copyright ©
Schnikes13
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2003-11-01 19:37:04]
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Re: Vulnerable
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:12:12 PM AEST
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I love this. It's excellent. Great job!!
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Re: Vulnerable
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by Philipa on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 08:45:47 PM AEST
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Trust is a lesson not easily learned as an adult. Very well written.
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