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A JUMP THROUGH
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 10:58:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The innocence
of the flame
as it
transcends
my darkness...
has never
been
lost on me.
Mesmerizing myself
to
escape....
escape my
crushing
loss of balance.
I dance
with the flickering
light...
lost to the
heat of the flame.
Willing
me to touch...
just once
to feel
the burning
pain....
to know
how my soul
feels
watching
my mind
grow
dark.
Feeling
the fall,
the
tumble
of will....
the tricks,
the hoops
of
broken sanity.
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-11-01 22:58:19]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: A JUMP THROUGH
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 11:09:37 PM AEST
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PHEW! Deep write.
"The innocence
of the flame
as it
transcends
my darkness...
has never
been
lost on me."
Great!!! |
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Re: A JUMP THROUGH
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 06:22:45 AM AEST
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Intense write, just enough words said to bring forth a lasting vivd image.
Great poem |
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Re: A JUMP THROUGH
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:20:32 AM AEST
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you have touched my soul today...great write
Shari |
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Re: A JUMP THROUGH
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:05:38 PM AEST
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damn I've done this exact same thing when I to have felt numb and needed to feel such a great poem. Hope yer doin ok.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: A JUMP THROUGH
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by ShadowDaughter on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:31:20 AM AEST
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Whoa, this is seriously good . . . chilling and so true.
--Nora |
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