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Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Saturday, 1st November 2003 @ 11:25:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I overheard my love was coming.....
I patiently waited his arrival
I waited
I waited
I waited
Waited for months... no one came
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2003-11-01 23:25:27]
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Re: untitled
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:45:11 AM AEST
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Re: untitled
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 09:58:25 AM AEST
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don't listen to anonymous... this was a great write. We all have our "Waiting for Godot" moments... Welcome to YPDC!!
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Re: untitled
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by Sinned on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:45:23 AM AEST
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Purgatori
Overheard would have been a good title.
I didn't know where you were--sooo--I didn't show up.
I liked this poem. You always provoke thought.
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Re: untitled
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:47:11 PM AEST
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Great poem you say so much with so few words. But make no mistake, you still a
walop in your poetic punch. very nice i
love going back in your earlier poems,
i get a feeling of yesterday. thanks for
writting these poems. Quite enjoyable
to read and contemplate. Deffinately worth
the 5 stars and vote.
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