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Is This ''Rape''
Contributed by
Trisha
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 12:25:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He Made The Biggest Mistake Of His Life.
She Was Young, What Did She Know.
It's Not Her Fault That He Raped Her.
She Didn't Ask For Him To Rape Her.
He Had Her Thinking It Was Her Fault.
She Hated Her Brother, He Didn't See
Though Him. Her Mom Told Her, It's Not
Her Brothers Fault. Over The Years She
Blamed HerSelf She Wanted To Kill HerSelf.
Her Brother Doesn't Even Know He Raped Her,
SomeDay She'll Tell Him. What Would He Think?
Did She Ask For It? She Never Said No. Was It
Her Fault? She Laid There While He Raped Her.
She Was Crying, He Grab Her Hands Tight And
Held Them Down. She Had Many Thoughts Going
Though Her Head. He Didn't Just Do It Once, He
Did It Couple Times. She Wants To Run Into Him
Ask Him What Did She Do For Him To Ever
Think About Raping Her.
Copyright ©
Trisha
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2003-11-02 00:25:39]
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 01:33:26 AM AEST
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| OMG I hope this didnt happen 2 u. I dont know wat 2 say, its such a beautiful poem and it really makes u feel for whoever this happened to. Great write. |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 04:47:34 AM AEST
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Good writing!
Hang tuff!
Jus keeping writing!
peace, joy, luv, healing,
emy |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by devine_xox on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:10:28 AM AEST
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| This exact situation happend to a very close friend of mine..She has lived her whole life trying to kill her self emotionally..Her brother was in his early twenties and she was 12 when it started...Her mother basically kicked her out of home and never believed what her daughter had said when she told her..At the age of 17 thats where it ended for her,she moved out and started a life of her own..She has always been troubled about what has happend to her but she is recovering..I hope whom ever this poem is dedicated to or for seeks councelling as it is a very strong write and very disturbing..but you have done a great job constructing your poem.. |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:14:14 AM AEST
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| The guilt a victim feels is strong...put there usually by the attacker....But it is not the fault of the child...She was used by a sick person in no way is the guilt hers... My heart goes out to her |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by mercedes on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 05:38:17 PM AEST
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| This is a good write though i hope it is not true. It hit me close to home as you can see if you read mine titled 'Innocence lost". |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by Merry on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 05:42:00 PM AEST
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excellent write - unnerving - gave me chills - if this is real life - whoever it is about should get counseling - don't carry the burden alone -
peace
merry |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 11:42:00 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem, but truly sad. This one hits really close to home for me. I can feel the pain written within this poem.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by Puffer on
Friday, 14th November 2003 @ 11:18:40 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is a great poem although very sad. I liked it so much, keep writing! This poem had me speechless. |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by Candi on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:42:04 AM AEST
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| my heart goes out to you. keep being strong. dont blame urself. bad things happen to good people. but im glad u used a bad experience for a good cause like this writing talent that u have. keep writing. dont let it get u down. |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by eviegirl on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 08:27:56 PM AEST
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| your very strong to post this, even if it isn't about you. i support you |
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Re: Is This ''Rape''
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by shorty_52 on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 10:46:24 PM AEST
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yes that was rape. i hope that if this is true that she tells him one of these days if she hasn't already. if not; she will in time
good write. keep up the good work.
~allyson~ |
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