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THE MARSH
Contributed by
Mooncharmer
on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 02:46:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A silent flutter
of wings
signals the start
of another dawn.
A loon
far off
voices its eagerness
to face today's morning.
The sky
softened now
with surreal colours
of chilled gold.
Fog swirls
in an
ancient dance
dressed in funeral grey.
Somewhere close
a puddle
of silver rings
widen on black water.
The early
breeze stirs
restless and willing
with the promise of October.
Copyright ©
Mooncharmer
... [
2003-11-02 14:46:10]
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Re: THE MARSH
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 03:12:18 PM AEST
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| Nice imagery.......Truthfully I was expecting an dark or dreary poem based on the title...c'mon!...marsh????...it is not usually a place of niceness. However you have really captured the beauty of the marshland and depicted it in a rather effective and powerful manner. |
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Re: THE MARSH
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by Philipa on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 05:09:25 PM AEST
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I disagree with the comment above. The wetland are a wonderful place to witness the beauty of nature as well as making a great subject for poetry. Nice imagery and well written.
Philipa |
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Re: THE MARSH
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 07:26:04 PM AEST
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| Gorgeous poem ... well written .. Jan |
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