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Confused
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 08:01:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Your gentle smile
makes me love you even more.
The way your voice
echoes in my dreams
makes my day easier to deal with.
You know where to touch me
to calm my aching soul.
Yet my confusion still runs free.
I tell you how i feel
and all that i fear
but still a secret travels my veins
I do trust you
that's why i give you my heart.
You hold it so close
and give it all your love.
I was told love wins in the end
but as i sit here
and write my lonely tears,
i get more and more confused.
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gery_giggles
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2003-11-02 20:01:20]
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Re: Confused
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by michelled43 on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 08:03:47 PM AEST
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| great write.......I feel the same way right now......it is a touching poem |
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Re: Confused
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by katzie on
Sunday, 2nd November 2003 @ 08:40:59 PM AEST
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| I found myself sitting here and nodding dumbly while I read my poem..... I've been working out a few things with some people and this poem really fits. You are a good poet. |
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