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Immortal wish
Contributed by
M
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Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 12:16:33 PM in AEST
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Dont you give up on me,
Say youll be there when I come around.
Ill lie here in my life long coma,
And your bitter tears of regret
Will eventually hit the ground.
Ill understand if you cant continue to care,
Its not like its all up to me,
Whatever way you choose to go,
I know youll continue to shine;
Blessed be.
Im petrified that one day soon,
One day, Ill wake up and find you gone,
Ill cry and stare in wonder,
At the emptiness of the room and the fear;
Ill have no one to love or to lean on.
Its up to you,
Do what you feel is right,
Dont worry yourself with my pain,
Dont ask me if Im ok,
Or if I sleep at night.
Before you say your goodbye,
Please, give me one final kiss,
As I lie, a silent princess on my death bed,
Remember,
Its my immortal wish.
Copyright ©
M
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2003-11-03 12:16:33]
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Re: Immortal wish
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 02:35:32 PM AEST
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| im laughing.....you are a very very good poet....enjoyed it....hope to see some more soon...........sandy |
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Re: Immortal wish
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 03:43:31 PM AEST
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This was beautifully written..tho so sad...
Jenni |
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Re: Immortal wish
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 3rd November 2003 @ 05:14:54 PM AEST
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I thought this was awesome if not terribly sad. Good write and glad to see something from you... Hope to hear from you soon.
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Re: Immortal wish
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 07:14:00 AM AEST
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M, this is beautiful, yet another beautiful poem.
I don't know who this was written for, but that's probably not relevent. Hope you're okay..
love always
x_x_x |
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