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The Epitome
Contributed by
Schnikes13
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Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:45:26 PM in AEST
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Youre you,
Too funny, too popular, too great.
Someone disliking you,
Is out of envy, not hate.
Youre Superman,
The epitome of all perfection.
Finding out who you are,
Is a grueling detection.
Youre ideal,
Every parents dream teen.
You getting in trouble,
Is something rarely seen.
Youre mind-blowing,
Taking me away by your wit.
People give up to you,
They automatically quit.
And yet, for some reason,
You say youre insecure
When you,
Being you,
Being Superman,
Being ideal,
Being mind-blowing,
Have nothing to be insecure about
Copyright ©
Schnikes13
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2003-11-04 22:45:26]
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Re: The Epitome
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 10:53:32 PM AEST
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Great write, Schnikes...one I can relate to...
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Re: The Epitome
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:25:47 PM AEST
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I knew someone like that once. Everybody loved her and yet she hated herself. I guess that's just life. Great write.
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