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Where Are You Now?
Contributed by
Snail_Babe_13
on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:05:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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His eyes,
His lies,
Those eyes,
He lies.
He knows,
I know,
He knows,
It shows.
He didn't care,
He wasn't there,
He didn't care,
and now I'm there.
So unaware,
of what was there,
so unaware,
that he didn't care.
He looked away,
He couldn't stay,
He looked away,
and drove away.
So where are you now?
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Snail_Babe_13
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2003-11-05 00:05:03]
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Re: Where Are You Now?
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 12:12:16 AM AEST
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Good job Snail.
~your sis Britt~ |
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Re: Where Are You Now?
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:07:06 AM AEST
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Awesome, creative,2 the point!
Very good writie!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Where Are You Now?
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by justinblue on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 07:47:05 PM AEST
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I really like this poem alot. I'ts very creative.
JUSTIN BLUE |
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Re: Where Are You Now?
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 07:51:44 PM AEST
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| Hey Girl. I am Brittnay friend and she told me to check your poetry out. I like it |
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Re: Where Are You Now?
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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Fabulous writing... I loved how the even and odd lines connected....
It's quite sad though. So if you're sad, I hope you feel better =)
hope for better days,
Jelly |
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