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silver stream
Contributed by
loopylou
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 04:34:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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silver sparkling stream
how i admire you
your age and wisdom
i pour into the depths of your water my hope heartache and dreams and a wish for your best intreast in whatever you do you suceed
i wish to watch them float
as your gentle water craddles them against the rapids
your so beutiful as you catch the light i need to sheild my eyes
as i watch you sparkling
and drifting along the muddy banks you brighten my scenery
i leave you now on your own
trusting you to face the strong currant of the world
with the comforting thought that when you cry
the understanding shore will always listen
and back down the hill my little stream you will carry on glistening
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loopylou
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2003-11-05 04:34:41]
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Re: silver stream
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:18:04 AM AEST
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Very good work here! U must have a great mom!
peace, joy, luv,
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Re: silver stream
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by maryetta on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 04:17:08 AM AEST
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and your only 15? poetry world, look out you have a talent comming up.
this is very good indeed, welcome to our world, i really like the potential this has
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