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Feeling Dark
Contributed by
Wolfareen
on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 01:51:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alone in my world,
I wait for love,
For heaven's great blessing,
To rain down from above.
Something coats my body,
Keeps me outside,
This longing in me,
Should long since have died.
Grey is my world,
No substance, just air,
The control inside me,
Just longing to tear.
Maybe if I scream,
They'll hear my call,
Come to catch me,
When I stumble and fall.
I'd like to see colour,
Feel the warmth of a kiss,
Can't someone show me?
What is it I miss?
Am I so hideous?
Am I so dull?
I drift through the crowds,
Cloaked in cotton wool.
I can't hear the words,
I can't see the scene,
Like a ghost, I wait,
For the light to go green.
I need to feel,
I need to be,
With no-one to love me,
I'm shelled out for eternity.
LOVE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Copyright ©
Wolfareen
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2003-11-05 13:51:01]
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Re: Feeling Dark
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 04:35:57 PM AEST
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a beautiful emotional write, I've been there, it does get better.
Good job |
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Re: Feeling Dark
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 04:57:49 PM AEST
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| Nice- I like some of your creative rhymes |
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Re: Feeling Dark
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 07:58:44 PM AEST
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Awesome flow the your poem, and the rhyming soundz great.
Keep it up. |
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Re: Feeling Dark
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 10:00:18 PM AEST
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| I know what this feels like... this is a beautiful write. great job! |
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