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Torture inside me
Contributed by
destiny
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Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:23:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Stars fade from the sky
but there are still stars in my eyes
You would never see them
and you take them from me
With every tear you wring from me
you take away my stars
the piercing pains of your every hateful word
cause my heart to eternally bleed
from those wounds you consume the blood
and everything that is me
with your lips you stop my words
and my every thought goes numb
you kill me everytime you look into my eyes
You possess me and I can't fight you
easily you are my master.
you burn my heart, turn it black
lock my soul away
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destiny
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2003-11-05 18:23:16]
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Re: Torture inside me
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:27:28 PM AEST
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| wow that's powerful!... very good Destiny! |
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Re: Torture inside me
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by TaintedOptomist on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:55:41 PM AEST
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| BRAVO |
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Re: Torture inside me
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 07:56:02 PM AEST
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Beautifully composed,
Well written and fully understand but i think for everyone that reads this will see a different meaning behind your words.
Well done. |
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Re: Torture inside me
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:15:19 PM AEST
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| A lot of emotion and feeling in your words... a job well done. |
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Re: Torture inside me
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:41:48 PM AEST
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very powerful emotions in this I like it alot keep up the great work
peace and joy
JENNI (purgatori) |
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