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-Shades of Grey-
Contributed by
TaintedOptomist
on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:51:38 PM in AEST
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only see in shades of grey
an unlawful display of love and loath
he held the smoking gun
bore a hole to the heart of one gone lost
took the leap and couldn't fly
took the plunge and couldn't swim
round and round
an end with no begining
spinning out of control
deja entendu
in a game he can't win
a psychotic drama queen
she stopped living
herdream unfulfilled
he shot the bottle
he choked on life
now he's seeing stars
suspended over speeding cars
he took the leap
see how he flies
see how the game of ife lies
deja entendu
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TaintedOptomist
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Re: -Shades of Grey-
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by katzie on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 06:58:48 PM AEST
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| Gives a vivid mental picture, a feeling of being trapped. Good write. |
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Re: -Shades of Grey-
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by Destiny on
Wednesday, 5th November 2003 @ 08:45:16 PM AEST
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| awesome write |
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Re: -Shades of Grey-
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 04:44:09 PM AEST
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| wow... |
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Re: -Shades of Grey-
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 06:04:29 PM AEST
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frig wow I'm amazed an awesome poem... loved it all.
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Re: -Shades of Grey-
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by Archie on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:27:26 PM AEST
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| Wow, Very interseting poem |
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