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Alone Either Way
Contributed by
teenageemogirl
on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 12:18:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I'm coming apart
Pieces bent and neglected
Undone and unwound
Once again rejected
Can't say it wasn't what I expected
Because I don't belong
Can't I just make it all invisible?
So wrong- feelings make me so weak
He's the words I dare not speak
Out loud, a whisper safe and true
(He makes me feel wonderful
So I'll just have to stick it through)
Because if I wait just for a chance
I could be dead before it's here
But if I just keep my space
I know these feelings will not disappear
So I can wait and see
If he'd like me stay
Or I can just leave him be
I'm alone either way
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2003-11-06 00:18:05]
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Re: Alone Either Way
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by sarah_may on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:35:51 AM AEST
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That was great! I can't wait for more poetry out of you! Keep up the great work!
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Re: Alone Either Way
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 03:10:10 PM AEST
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This was a smashing work.... you did an excellent job capturing the feeling--- yes, we're going to be alone either way......
I hope things get better for you though
God bless,
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