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Paradise
Contributed by
Death_Fire530
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 12:22:10 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Walking the edges of the streams
Viewing the shady leaves of the trees
I know I am in paradise
Away from the hellish screams
And along with the birds and the bees
I know I am in paradise
Nothing can compare to the beauty of it all
As I watch the brown and yellow leaves fall
And I know I'm in paradise
Seeing that nothing is made of simple stuff
I notice how the wonders of nature are the greatest of all
Yet, no one else sees this...
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2003-11-06 00:22:10]
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Re: Paradise
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by Zepher on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 12:52:12 PM AEST
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I see it! I could lose a day walking through the woods or on a beach soaking up the beauty.Great write.
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Re: Paradise
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 04:35:31 PM AEST
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| i see it too :) beautiful write... |
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