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The Voice of the Nations
Contributed by
sarah_may
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Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:33:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Why cant everyone get along?
I just dont see why thats so wrong.
We argue about the small stuff,
While trying to act, oh so tough.
Why cant hatred and war cease?
So we can all just live in peace.
The youth of our nations cry.
We all dont really want to die!
This is our plea
We just want to be able to run free.
We dont want to face war,
Every time we try a new door.
It all begins to cloud my mind,
Im afraid of the future for what I might find.
On our own we make no gain,
But God above sees our pain.
He loves us all,
And all our names he tries to call.
He constantly tries to relieve,
Even though not all believe.
You may not understand too clearly,
But He loves us all quite dearly.
I was born into this place,
Never guessing what I must face.
The man on TV tells me,
What our world has come to be.
Love is gone, replaced with hate,
Just perhaps, this is my fate.
Those who came before this generation,
Must have already chosen our destination.
It isnt fair,
But do they care?
Obviously not,
Cause if they did, they would have fought,
For the very best for you and me;
And not have left us here to be.
But this is my life and Ill live it well,
Cause I dont want to burn in hell.
I had no choice,
But one day theyll hear my voice.
Saying out into the crowds,
That have all gathered round.
The youth of the nations will cry out,
Everyone will hear us shout.
Let us be free!
Please, I beg of thee,
We are the youth of tomorrow,
But our hearts are filled with sorrow.
So why cant hatred and war cease,
So just for a moment, we can all experience real, live, peace?
Copyright ©
sarah_may
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2003-11-06 01:33:31]
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Re: The Voice of the Nations
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:46:20 AM AEST
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Hi Sarah,
If this is your first write then I'd say u found your calling. Stay with it as the world needs to hear your voice and others as well.
This is written like a pro!
peace, joy, luv,
emy
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Re: The Voice of the Nations
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by venkat on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:50:38 AM AEST
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| Awww, this is a very good poem. Blessings Sarah...venkat |
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Re: The Voice of the Nations
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by irshprnss on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 08:43:36 AM AEST
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This poem has a very strong point, and was written very well!! Nice Job
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Re: The Voice of the Nations
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 01:39:49 PM AEST
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| awesome write........ |
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Re: The Voice of the Nations
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 6th November 2003 @ 03:31:31 PM AEST
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| I liked the writing and message but if you wanted to pose a question I would take it to the forum as I am used to talking about this and it's not just what it seems.... Just my opinion though. Like I said it is an excellent write and message. |
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Re: The Voice of the Nations
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 10:36:38 AM AEST
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I do apolagize for how my post sounded. I liked the write and the message and that part I don't change. I was just suggesting that this would make a great forum topic. Also I was saying that people might say that there are different reasons for why we have war. I don't think it is always over hatred. I am sorry if my comment sounded bad.
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Re: The Voice of the Nations
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by sarah_may on
Friday, 7th November 2003 @ 02:31:31 PM AEST
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I'd like to say to everyone, thanks! Um...and when I say war, I'm talking about everything...parents fighting, friends, country, etc....Thanks again
Sarah May |
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